In my 2nd focus group I screened some of my editing, It was only about 40 seconds long but I wanted to get an early opinion on how the decoder was reading my text and if there was any improvements to be made.
They commented on how the shots were much steadier and brighter since they last saw my filming, so im glad that I have improved on the quality of my shots. Everyone took the dominant reading of my text, which meant they all understood and agreed with what I was portraying
Points to work on:
* Use more cuts - as video is purely concept based it needs a lot of cuts to make it effective (Mr Morris)
* Use more of lyrics being visually spelt out, when in time with music looks very effective (Jake and Mr Morris)
Wednesday, 28 April 2010
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